unwritten hazard - ur structure was fuckin horrible.......that made ur flow fall off drastically.......vocab was pretty good........nice multis......wordplay was tight.......punches were ok........personals were aight......
bio chemist - structure was good.........flow was on target........vocab was ok..........some of the multis were good........wordplay was ok........punches connected........good personals.........
breakdown -
structure - bio
flow - bio
vocab - unwritten
multis - unwritten
wordplay - unwritten
punches - bio
personals - bio
conclusion - bio chemist takes this in structure, flow, and more importantly punches and personals so he gets my vote........
VOTE - BIO CHEMIST
yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114139
thanx.........