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Old 02-14-04, 06:11 PM   #25
Brethren
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Punches: Under, both had pretty nice punches, liked the wackness line, liked the punchline line. Under just barely took this category
Wordplay: Under, had the yellow line, though it was forced as fuck
Multis: Neither, both used 1 syllable liners
Personals: Oakley, entire verse was almost personals, you whack motherfuckers need to read the verse.
Opener: Oak, nice creative personal, Under's was pretty weak
Closer: Under, Oak's pic line was decent, but the line after what weak

Vote - TheUnderRated

Really close battle, keep up what you do Oakley, you're already pretty good, so keep elevating.

but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line
Best line from Under

If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/
Oak's best line
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