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Old 02-14-04, 06:21 PM   #19
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Good battle by both...
I liked underrateds approach altohught it couldve
been better worded... and not all split up...
jsut make transitions... pretty good verse
imagery was there and internals...
good job...

rule-I like your verse more... you had a
better imagery to it... I like to see that
in topicals... and you had the internals also...
and your verse wusnt split it so I didnt have to read
it twice... pretty good evrse also... it was
worded very good too good job man...

My V/Rule-If it's not considered a hate vote... vote on me n rules battle.... in elevated fl... and can both yall give honest votes on the battle sin my sig V.Assasin
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