I don't know if I would have marked this as hot rippage.... The chorus was kind of odd (it just seemed too long and drawn out with a semi-flat sound). Some of the lyrics were like ehhh... but you said you weren't real serious on it or anything so no big deal. Some parts sounded a little dead on emotion... Ain't too bad though.

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