Ok

Breakdown

Taciturn…

Ur flow was good..however nothing hard hitting…U need harder
Hitting punches..something clever everything was basic..
Ur best line was
“this niggas gonna find out soon that im the man in charge
maybe he thought it was hard to rhyme a word like cannabarz”

Only because I seen something in that line that was possible of
Creating something clever…


Now for
Cannabarz2

Ok Ur flow was very good and U had very good vocab..I didn’t really
See any punches that hit…or was their even any…However over all
A well written battle verse..
Ur fav Line
“Their'-terrible, KEEP IT at that my passive-raps will burn-your-access
Your ass-will-gasp, because you ain't seein-can like nervous-actors”
That was actually a cool clever punch line somewhat…Ur first line too
Was good..

Overall Cannabarz takes it no hate…Taciturn stay elevating..

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...727#post1184727