Notes to rap better...
1. Pick a non-gay beat
2. Make sure people can hear the beat
3. Don't try to rap so fast
4. Breathe
5. Mark this track as a joke!!! (or at least I hope)
I don't know man.... This is bad, I aint even gonna pretend, you need work like a dude who's been unemployed for about 9 years!
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