Breakdown..

Auspicious:
Nice verese In my opinion you started off slow, then you came very good
With personals. Structure was real good. An easy read.

Your best line
“why read his verse ^^ thats the whole synopsis..
you cant top this.. write sum shit? naw, he aint even on my margin
Retarded, stupid, illiterate <--- he was guilty on all charges”

There were some more quotable however this is what caught my eyes
The most.. Nicely done.


Breakdown..
ILLunatic :

Your verse wasn’t hard hitting not really any quotable I think you can
Do better,, I guess you was being lazy. At any rate Your best line
“believe it??? nope, his popularity fallin downhill like an avalanch slope”
That was pare…


Over all Auspicious wins
Due to better personals
Please vote on my battle honest votes..it’s being slept on

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