Dude you sound a little whiney like Fred Durst or something. I'm just glad you didn't keep up that deepened synthesieed voice you had the begining. This might have sounded better with better sound quality... but that kind of killed it. I don't know if the WestCoast Gangsta style beat is a good choice for you man. You seemed to jump around on topics too for some reason.
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