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Old 02-14-04, 07:17 PM   #6
Menik
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Yeah this was alright here i thought....All three verses seemed pretty good, like Kryo said some good and some weak lines, but overall it was alright.....structure could be fixed up a bit but it was ok....The flow in this was alright, it stayed on point...keep at it.
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