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Old 02-14-04, 07:39 PM   #11
Intoxicated
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Aight... MastaRappa... ya punches didnt go wit the rest of the line... you talk about one thing but ya punch has nuthin to do wit it... like the Franchise line and the orgasm cum... wtf?? Other than that, some shit was played like the masterlock line... your last line was the best one...
overall, not the best verse... 60/100

Potent... Good punch about making the band!! very original... first bar was ok... 3rd bar was aight, metah was played tho... 4 line was kinda ehhh... ok... decent punch tho... I didnt like the last bar becauz of the wack American Online part... The part is played and then using "AO" instead of American Online was dumb... but you didnt need much a whole lot to win this battle... your Making the band punchline was the best in the battle by far...


vote - POTENT
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