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Flyweight
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IP:
Vocab was high-level. Flow was pretty good but I think it could be a little better. Your lines are pretty long - so it'd be nice to see some more stuff going on inside them. I liked:
"So you say you spit acid, we'll im the alkali that nuetralizes it/
Phantoms bellicose style, sends you falling in a bottomless pit/"
Keep spitting. Hit something in my sig. (preferably Broken Metamorphosis if you haven't yet)
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