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Yo dat was pretty tight really the only thing wrong wit it was you didnt space your lines and some of them got a little hard to read as in i couldent tell what the rhymin words were and some vocab. here and there try to look at the alfebet .......but other than that on a scale of 1-10 ten bein jus straight up sick ide say proly bout a 6 1/2 witch isnt bad i have seen alot worse so just space your lines work on some vocab and you got the verse on grip!
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