speak only when spoken to i didn't agree to batter you/
i mean battle you and shatter your brain while it's swellin from INTOXICATING MATTER TO/2
^^ok kinda streched 2/5

yo on this site like every CHUMP they should ban u/
but after you read 1 line u'd be my biggest fan 2 /4
whack 0/5

fag... i make this into a fist fight for all as a spectacle/
that way they can see JOHN beat in this HETEROSEXUAL/6
whack 1/5

my rhymes are more deadlier than the next spittin venom to intoxes neck/
then kill him in a brutal lashing for everyone to make things correct/8
ok 2/5

my shockingly refreshing lyrical quenches beat even the most of such sinches/
turn men into vagina's and make them all bitches/10
decent 3/5

the most wanted sheet has surprisingly took off a name for it's list/
cuz' intox won't battle now Y.. i think he slit his wrist/
whack 0/5

[bJohn 8/30[/b]

u need to quit numbering ur line thas newb shit...u also need to try and keep ur structure even its real crooked..u need to work on punches and flow also
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Tox got a sick mind, wit rhymes that leave lips fried
I see you're still elevating... gettin stuck on the Hillside
good fow nice mult 3/5

didnt agree to battle?? you said you'd flow if i set it
I'll smash ya face in the ground until ya nose is embedded
decent 2/5

i spit sulfaric acid that go right through you like ghosts
Everybody laughs at ya wack shit like that dude in ya post
nice 3/5

Ya unreal... wack n lackin skill... im phat n ill
ya squads wack...the Jaguars only pro team in Jacksonville
whack 1/5

relax n chill... dont be stressin cuz you cant rap at all
You need to put the mic down n stick to playin basketball
whack 1/5

intox 10/30

u need to work on harder punches and quit forcin multies...........
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