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Old 02-14-04, 11:58 PM   #31
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Envee - ur structure was fuckin horrible........ur flow was wack as hell.........ur vocab was basic........ur multis were weak.........hardly any wordplay...........some of the punches were ok at best.......no personals......

proof - structure was good....flow fell off a lil.......vocab was basic........no multis.........wordplay was ok.......some of the punches were good........personals were nice.....

breakdown -
structure - proof
flow - proof
vocab - tie
multis - envee
wordplay - tie
punches - proof
personals - proof

conclusion - proof takes this in structure, flow, punches, and personals so he gets my vote........

VOTE - PROOF

yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u (Proof) did the same in my battle against envee....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114227

thanx.........
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