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02-15-04, 01:40 AM
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Tactixx
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i like the story, it was present throughout the whole song, the imagery was pretty good, a couple of nice metas "He stilled belived. and he tried so hard..
he belived he would walk a million miles.. if he could walk a yard"<---one imparticular.
spelling could of used a little work..interesting story with a consistent flow nice job...keep it up...post an honest vote on my battles...i want them closed
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112928
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