Banned: Compromised Account
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coo...
i especially like the ending...that
was a fucking nice ending...a couple parts
in the beginning i didnt like afew lines..
the regain the sit epart i didnt like...
it also had some parts that werent so original..
the sin part..the book part....but overall i liked this
a bit...the ending gave it a better feel...peace..
peep the open mic in my sig...thanx
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