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LOL i dont knwo what's goin on here... n noone better call me a noob or tell me i dont know what im talking about.... I think unwritten hazard took this battle...
Your right ... he didnt have a lot of direct hits ... he had a few nice lines tho .... The structure wasnt so fucked up i couldnt read it, coulda been fixed but his shit flowed fine...
"battle me? my skills are endless, relentless...i got more "bars" than jailed up fences//
the mic menace, acting like Texas about to "serve" Chemist a death "sentence"///"
^^ Nice multis n wordplay
"good thing you have a labratory, cause your gonna need nurse care////
imma fry this scientist with my mic, till he looks like Eintstein with worse hair"
^^ Kinda funny - real visual, good imagery
I really just didn't like Bio Chemists verse...
the first line was actually a pretty decent punch:
"Ur Gay when It comes to lyrics, Anal to me and -Trapt-
This proves U try to do -Re Dic Us- (ridiculous) moves now how gay is that… "
"Battle me Fear is a Must On the same Level..??
I’ll kill U in the next episode so we can -See Equal- (Squeal)…"
^^ Dont like this one
"Unwritten so U don’t script any Hazard…
Read his sig “Gay n Green” (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he’s fagot "
^^ creative wordplay ... punch was just ok ... hazard n faggot seem a lil too forced
"After this battle U won’t have a mouth To breathe Threw,
Chemically thrust moves vanishing Ur vocals..
With Ur whack ranks and gay style Ur new alias is -Diss Purse"
^^ Wtf is all this??
"U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-"
^^ Ok line but how is that a punch ...i get what youre saying but i just dont see how it's effective
All in all you had a couple decent punches, some decent wordplay... flow was ok...
This was Hazards worst filler crap...
"im devilish, here to" bomb" on these terrorists when i drop it///
then torture their "chemist" tied up in his office///
then make him read my lyrics contents so his eyes pop outta his sockets//
fucked up your optics, ill transmit a virus though kleenex///
infect his lines with diseases, then tell him to eat it///
this is my first time seeing a BIO CHEMIST, who doesnt know how to be "sick"////
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
and whenever someone says bio chemist, i always think DUD//"
But i really liked his first line and some of the other stuff decent until ^^ that crap...
It's almost a tie battle... i think Bio Chemist came weak... Hazard should work on less filler... but he managed to pull it off by a hair... I might be the only one who sees it this way but i think Unwritten Hazard got this....
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND DROP AND HONEST VOTE ON ONE OF MY BATTLES...
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