yo, wordplay takes this with ease.

WORDPLAY... your verse was easy to read and it had an ongoing flow. Structure was there and a liked some of your punches. you had some good personals as well. You had some creativty as well...

Xceltiz..you had a rubbish verse. It lacked flow and it had no structure. You didnt have any punches and your personals were very weak indded. You didnt have any wordplay or creativity. You need to evaluate...

vote WORDPLAY

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