soundz like someone just got finished listening to "So Sick"...but this piece was straight...some of the multiz were good...although I feel that you kinda lost ya flow in some parts...and work on ya structure...it makez the verse a WHOLE lot easier for otherz to read when it's in good structural form...and this ain't really had a concept or story behind it...but then again...it wasn't supposed to...so it's good for what it was...peep my open mic when you get a chance...it's called "Tortured Wordz" I think...I just thought of a quick title for it that soundz intellectual...lol...holla...