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Old 02-15-04, 08:42 AM   #1
Freeman
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How can it improve?

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This bitch is distorted.. You can tell you dont have a good poker face
Here your out of place...
... Rejected from the deck cuz ur the 5th ace
Just quit already.. Your verse should be burnt.. You should pack it
You can beat newbs but...
... When it comes to me you cant hack it
Sending you packing.. Off to the woods with you.. Ace the little camper
You got 13 wins cuz your from edit so all you...
... Do to your verse is tamper
Making your avy a portrait of you.. Leaving you mentally broken
My advice to you...
... Is go on get help from Token
Its nice to see you admit.. Im happy that finally you followed suit
Im the one who made your eyes roll...
... By making my writing minute

Whats wrong with that?

Wana elevate more... So... Im wondering whats wrong with that...

This was against Straight Ace and he won 5-2...

Thanks...

Pz...
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