hey this was a great peice. the words were so well chosen. the topic was a reely gud 1 that alot of people choose but i havnt seen any as gud as this, the vocab was gud, and the imagery excellent!!

........fav part........

God departed from the desert, left no trace of caring mark,
A work of art, the human body at its best, prime condition,
Crime ambitions, putting the Bible to the test..you've guessed the rest,
A world that loathed beliefs, spited and smited every tell tale sign,
So that nothing they've achieved, they say, 'the world is mine'

keep droppin
return tha favor
( me amabu and where i go )
....bless

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