this one was pretty close, but i would have to say Oakley took this one with some harder punches, a nice flow, which was easy to read and it was well structured with alot of personals and a couple of alright metas, your opener and closer were nice...
Quelude:decent verse too, punches just didnt land as hard, same with the personals,
try to work on your openers and finishers...it makes quite an affect on the battle
vocab was decent...wouldnt hurt to throw in better vocab and wordplay...but nice verse all the same....nice job guys...
return the favor.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112928
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431