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Old 02-15-04, 12:40 PM   #45
lyricallyabusive
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oooooooooooooooo mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..............YO WAT UP!!.........fuq son......u killed em with the line wit " its sad cuz da only tyme u get votes is wen ur friendz r on"........yo dat waz titeeeeeee..........
enveee- i seriously have no idea how u got one of ya votes.....i swear this is no dikride....but seriously.....ur verse was wak......no hate....u had no personals.....ok punches.....n pretty good flow......
yo what up- i found humour in ur verse.....and i like dat.....i luved ur line b4 the closer......u had ok personasls.....beautiful punches......n ok flow.....but overall- u killed em
i think yo what up takes it in probably every category but structure......envee took that but both gotta work on it.....
vote- yo what up
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^^^^u know wat do 2.......ill return favor......ill get 100 postz very soon....