I'd copy and paste my reply from RnR, but that would be pointless.
This is one of the best pieces I've read in ages, flawless flow, beautiful wordplay and the whole concept/metaphor/orgasm was just fucking wicked.
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Originally Posted by Bare Knuckles
...I waited and waited, being encircled by looming vultures
But was finally greeted by a whimpering sky that boomed with thunder
Its harsh winds smudged the colour ‘til there was no hope to dry
As an intimidating rain precipitated from the broken skies
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That is really good imagery.
Amazing piece dude.