It takes at least two reads to really grasp the scope in this piece...well done though... i see a lot of care in the craft... You should try making some intrinsic metaphors go deeper... im just not sure if the weather, and thus nature, is the culprit of man's imperfection or just a vehicle for imagery... I mostly unsure because I feel like im lead to believe the Artist/God figure is the one failing the Painting/Man... How does the Rain with in?

keep doin what you're doin

{Peace}