ba da da da daaa Im lovin' it! as JT might say...

well it was a little rambling at the beginning but you really picked up at the end... the rhyme structure might be overly complex at points but it could be worked out.. im not sure cuz id have to hear you spit it... Not sure if you are a genius poet or if this piece is just hard to understand... but does this work mean anything??

{Peace}