Eh...before you start posting in forums, be familiar with whatsup. NOONE wants to read those two verses, because they might be rewrites of the bible for all they know. I skimmed through them, and decided Split Vision's was more skilled. You both need elevation. It seems like you can both flow and rhyme well, but there is nothing else at all. No wit, creativity, wordplay, etc. Maybe a few personals here and there, but it doesnt really do much. Elevate kids. Write shorter verses and concentrate on the dopeness of the content.
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Hit this up right now... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114170

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