ok hook is catchy but ou slightyl rush gonna be.. flow is pretty on point .. a few minor slips but nothing huge.. delivery.. is good and bad.. you emphasize the right parts.. but i dont know if i feel how you do it know what i mean... anyway.. nice rhyme scheme.. this is a solid joint man keep dropping
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