i understood the first verse perfectly..
but the second didnt sink in so much
the flow really kept the piece ticking over and encouraged me to read as much as the story
nice imagery..
the weather parts were a nice touch..
could picture it well
overall a nice drop..
some was above my head but still good reading
would appreciate a reply to my joint 'anopheles'
getting slept on..
props 1/2 n 1/2