Light Weight
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Intense.
no other word for that flow. Im not sure i really loved every line but i think at least 90 percent of it was brilliant...
Since when did poverty become new to this society?
They still tryn' me, but I refuse, fuck notoriety
I`m ready to blast back for this ransack of my privacy
Internet piracy is entirely biased, don`t lie to me
^wow, the 3rd line has a nice use of a different rhyme. It's like painting a picture with primarily blues and greens and then throwin in a point of red to drive the viewers eyes...
With death rates on the rise the skies were black
Protruding from God, I understood and looked back -
At the clock again as it read a quarter to twelve
..Damn another lost soul just went off into hell
^Ill shit man, i found the elision showed me exactly where the pause was and helped me understand your flow
keep up the good work
{Peace}
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