lol @ the dj clue like intro.. ok moving on..im not really feeling that hook homie..you ride the beat.. but in kinda weird way it threw me off at first.. but its a unique steez... yeah i felt the flow someimes and sometimes not as much.. i think maybe its just that it sounds better to me with this steez when your either flipping a multi laden rhyme scheme or spiutting faster.. because when you rapped slower with a simpler rhyme scheme at points.. it just didnt sound totally right to me.. it may just be adjusting to your style.. delivery was cool.. could be improved some but its solid.. real nice at certain parts in fact.. overall this was a solid drop homie.. keep it up
return the favor please
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