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Old 02-15-04, 03:10 PM   #8
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dope
alway dropping goodness..
and this piece was ill..
the whole piece showcased your talent and hit a chord with my brains thinking process
the references to the canvas etc were nice as hell
i take it the verse was a metaphor for the life of the person

'The room grew colder and I must bare the screams it brings
As the papyruses kneaded strings unfolded from the heated ink
I panicked, beads of sweat fell and softly I prayed...
...That the Heaven’s would open with rain and wash me away
^ill..feeling that


'The once beautiful hues faded with no struggle or fuss
Blistering the canvas ‘til there was nothing but a puddle of mud
And when my artist found me, he couldn’t even think or react
All he saw was his dreams of a masterpiece sink through the cracks...
^that also

the long bar scheme was masterfully used..
props BK

please reply to my Anopheles piece..
slept on
appreciate it
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