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Free Agent.
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IP:
Lyrical MC- Vote
Bakn Ruckus- Dogg, You Came Weak, UR Vocab Was Prolly The Best Thing And It Still Wasnt Better Then LMC's. Your PUnches Hit Him, But NOt Hard Enough, Wordplay Was Aight, And Structure Was Strecthed, Fixed Ya Strcut. Flow Was Ok. Overall, Bad Verse..
Lyrical Mc- I Expected More, You Came Weak Too, Your Vocab Was Ok, And Some OF Your Punches Connected, Your Wordplay Was Weak, Work On That, Your Structure was Messed Up Too, but Better. You Flowed Good. Overall, Ok Verse..
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Needa Be The Same Length And Syllables
Lyrical MC
Punches- B
Flow- B+
Vocab- B
Wordplay- C
Overall Grade- B
Bakn Ruckus
Punches- C
Flow- C
Vocab- B-
Wordplay- B+
Overall Grade- C/B-
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