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Old 02-15-04, 03:53 PM   #17
Tactixx
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Your the wrong combination to get passed this so stop.
And fuck probably knows the right combination when I master lock,
^^ehhh, this was kinda weak^^
I'm SOOOO the man right cuz I'm known to stamp guys,
Put my hands on your neck and titan so much you'd think I own the franchise,
^this was ok, nice wordplay and punch^^
Awww man you had me goin pretendin you was tough and all thug,
So now I'm crushing balls off the tee's like the end of a golf club,
^not really a hard punch, coulda been better^^
This guys biting names, but it sort of reflects him because he hasn't one,
His writing lames, again this reflects him cos he can't give an orgasms cum,
^weak punch...multi at least^
This kid ain't a rapper no more, only sellin out on a gambling tout,
Liquifyin his organs, so Potent could let it go and pour his heart out
^^pretty weak closer^^

Rappin master:i've seen much better from you, the flow was kinda off and the punches were weak or didnt land...a couple of nice lines but that about it


Theres a line between a newbie and vet ….a newbie is where u fit
…I’ll drop a weak spit…u got mike in ya avy and u still cant be it
^^^ok opener, punch and personal^^
This cat choked in are last battle…he got ko’ed.. something serious
I droped this cat quicker then making of the band droped mysterious
^haha....nice punch, and personal^^
…I’m like trillville cause this hoe nigga can neva eva get on my level
I’m burryin this dude quick and lettin be the punches be tha shovel
^doesnt really rhyme, kinda played^^
….I come before this nigga Masta Rappa…the poll states that fact
….U rhymes are small and compact..they suck ass like a anal sex act
^^weak sex punch^^
It didn’t take much to have dis cat beat…this is anotha Ko fo sho
…Leave this nigga in the hospital wit more connections then Ao (america online)
^pretty good closer^^

Vote-Potent...his flow was nicer and his punches hit harder and were more consistent
there were a couple more personals and some nicer wordplay...peace

hit these up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112928