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Old 02-15-04, 04:23 PM   #13
The Judge
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rite this battle was clear from the start 1st of i read marv's spit,
and i see alot of bullshit here your flow was wak man,
as your strcuture was streched on places and also.
your punches were wak you need them to stand out and they didnt,
here atall man,not a bad try but elavate,
ill....nice spit did what you had top do man...your strucutre was nice here,
not explaining your lines werked here...punches were quite nice,
and flow was ontrack nice spit v- ill,

plz plz hit this up man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...741#post1186741 thx ............