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Old 02-15-04, 04:47 PM   #7
The Judge
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rite this was nothing special atall really,
wasnt really a battle but this is how i see it,
lust your verse was ok but your flow was to choppy,
you could be alrite but youve gotta build your lines,
out more with more bulk instaed of lil punches,
strucuture was ok ive seen better man ekp elavateing thoi man,
nic-wordplay was nice heree..you had a better strucutre alotho
flow fell of abit...your punches were nicer but you gotta hit,
harder man....but overall you take this b/c of punches..

...plz hit this up now thx alot http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114455 no hate.....
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