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IP:
This was pretty good...
I've seen others by you...
and by far this was the worst
not that it sucked but it wus
a little confusing at times,
and sometimes it didnt flow...
You can do way better than
this... and your transitions
werent that good here...
keep it up though...
_-SyaNidal-_
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