i don't think the vocab or wordplay was much better than average...

but that doesn't mean i didn't love this piece for it's stunningly simplistic imagery and it's efficient delivery...

too many people have nothing else to say but "it's sooo complex!" naaah shit the beauty is in the sparseness of the landscape of words you use...

my only complaint is that this is more poetry than a rap... but hey it's text so i can't tell how you might flow it...without a beat it might sound like some beatnik poetry over a beat it could be an underground classic... who knows?

{Peace}