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Old 02-15-04, 07:18 PM   #4
B.I.Detained
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yup nice piece.
Flow was nice here & ya Vocab like Eddy said was def on point
I liked ya piece here coz ya came good in the story n gave it
and original depth which i was feeling. I actually like the Me,me ,me
thang. Overall a well thought out piece
props n keep bein consistent
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