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Old 02-15-04, 07:30 PM   #17
Archeologist
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till.:. your verse was nice and i was feelin it,you had a good few punches, and you had an aiight opener and closer..your flow was a bit smooth but lil patchy.!.
ThA Ce.:. your verse was good but i wasnt realy feeling it.your flow was patchy and your opener was wack....2nd line you were self praising (Dont).Sum aiight punches but sum were missin........
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