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Old 02-15-04, 07:44 PM   #17
Brethren
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Punches: Mentality, alright punches
Wordplay: Mentality, good wordplay, def. your best asset
Multis: Hate, had a few flow enhancing multis
Personals: Mentality, had the XFL line
Opener: Mentality, Hate opened up really weak
Closer: Mentality, personal finish, Hate was uppin himself

Vote - Mentality

Hate, you gotta work on quality punches, just think up some jokes or some wordplays involving personals or something. Flat out elevate. Mentality, you need work on your flow, definitely count syllables and change words after you type up something to make it sound better. You got some nice wordplay though.

once i blaze the lead its ova, hit ya face n head n shouldas //
hav ya skin lookin like u had a case of melanoma //
Good vocab, and multi

Pile Uneven Numbers In Your Head, Just To Show How The Odds Are Stacked
Dope wordplay, flow was off though
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