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Se7eN

Hold the phone, I’ll cap ya dome, till ya seeing gold chrome
If being wack in a verse is talent, this kid has to be in a zone
Multi's... Forced... Not bad though... 5/10
Evolve looked at this kid, like how is his rap skills a gift
Only way he’s still standing, is because a body builder gave him a lift
Lol... Nice... 6/10
He called for a fight, but he’s really getting beat wit the mic
His chance of winning, are like Loyd Banks turning white
[b]Nice again... 6/10
This kids, career lived, is as short as a lighter that juss lit
I’ll blow out the flame, so your name is a cross between whale and bitch
Nice... 7/10
Die young, he’s to dumb to be in a game for the smart and witty
This kid’s style is as pumped, as a fat teen wit big titties
Played... But nice enough flip... 6/10

Overall... 30/50

MrTokealot

Ill slaughter-this-kids-writes…to show he aint even when punished
This boy needs to alter-his-quick-types…its like hes tongue-twisted
This didnt rhyme... Nice mult's... 4/10
Your only seeing-weak-bars…you cant handle me with lucked-chants
You don’t have any-lays to beat these deploys…nobody lands-a-glance
I have many-ways to snap se7ens poise…don’t think you stand-a-chance
Not feeling it... 4/10
The way this kids being-beat-hard…you could call him a fucked-cunt
I smash through-wack-spits…its like your setting-lot-packs-new-ways
Why does this newb-act-big…hes only getting-popped-back-to-place
These high-rate-spits-flip and pound…se7en wont hit-me-with-blurs
The way i-rape-this kid…i should be known as the next kiddie-fiddler
The rhyme scheme was so hard to break down... That a didnt bother...

Overall... 15/50

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