ok...well ive been replyin to pieces all night that have 0 responses....and so far all have been really short...but this isnt and i cant for the life of me understand why its getting slept on....

the rhyme scheme u had flow'd nicely...kept the piece on top an usually rhyme comes out sounding forced an ish, but u did a great job of keep in it real

i seriously have to many lines to quote but this stood out to me the most:

But I'm like a flea even though they eating me
I'm still insignificant and I jump really far
Does that make them cannibals or are they going too far?
How many more thoughts can I provoke for you to see?

good ish...hope to read mo from u

return the fav plz

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