yo fam srry to see this being slept on an glad to see u delvin in poetry...its really not much dif from most rap stylez...

i thin that this is missin somethin an if u eva get it together u should finish this cuz i love the path its goin down...

i thought the way u used ur rhyme sparingly showed that u already kno was good an didnt turn it to a rap with excess of rhyme...

hope to see the end of this some day man

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