lol......this was a merk
eki-sorry dude but your verse was WHACK.....no hate but your structure was messed up and your punches were horrible.....and your closer was a good try but u failed horribly.....try to fix ya structure and come wit harder punches.....overall not a good verse.......3/10
token-u took this pretty easily....you had better punches creativity and structure....there isnt much to be said...u had a couple decent lines....it seemed like u quickly keyed ya verse.....but it was all u needed.....good verse....7/10
v/token
hit this honestly please
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114457