Let me see here.
NICE
Flow-Very nice, read it through easily without messing up.
Structure-Not bad, goes along with the Open Mic.
Vocab-Alos fitted into this very nice, good use and you showed an understanding of it unlike some people.

NOT NICE
Well try not to CAP or "" tihngs, I mean it may fit in with what your spitten but it looks more persentable without thme, same goes with the structure.

Overal this was a pretty good peice, keep up the good work mna.
NMMNG=Nice

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