I'm loving the concept man, ...least i think i am, the indians those who hate, the forest the place where they are, and you shouldnt go... hahaha meaning aside though im thinking this is some ill stuff, dig the way everything is described and the way you put that together, little bit of feeling here, lot more there, and just enough where its needed. Though that last line kinda takes me out of the feeling, find it funny, a bit upper mood than the rest of it, but at the moment I'm not looking for laughs and its making me think you were in a hurry to end it