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IP:
alright - as you acknowledged you put more effort into the rhymes than into the lyrics. Which made it somewhat odd because some of the ideas didn't seem to be connected. flow was pretty good - I think the oddness of the rhymes kinda reinforced your topic though so I'll say overall - 6.75 Keep writing. Hit something in my sig, preferably Broken Metamorphosis if you haven't already.
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