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Old 02-15-04, 11:05 PM   #8
SMZ
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From: Charleston, SC
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Very nice piece - tight rhymes and flow - good vocab level - used your words to make me feel what you feel. So once again very nice. Just thought I point out too that technically the rhyme is:
leapt at me...
expect of me...
molested me
so it's not really repetitive at all. Hit something in my sig - preferably Broken Metamorphosis if you haven't yet.
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