makaveli-rest

im riding in my escalade
with my extra blade in my pocket
in the other one i got my rocket
i got out the car and poped it
dont know where the 1st bar ends, so broke it off here...regardless..very wack!!
the guy was john dough
down in one blow
umm...no
he didnt think
thats why he was unconus in one blink
weakkkk
i poped it again now he dead
got hit straight in the head
wack closer man, very very wack

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John Dough

Ya great kid..ya elevated..going up against u..I'll fall
fuck that..
....I don't know whether to post 2 lines or not at all!
this opener looks hella better than that dude's
Damn looks like you took a shit..then went and posted it
Wait hold up..let me go get a fuckin mod to close this
not bad..
So ya tupac huh? are you just looking for a bit of fame?
Cuz ya punches are about as played..as well..ya name!
had a good beginning, lost it whith second line..
Its wrestling match..but in tha opening seconds u get pinned
You want pacs name? well i guess you'll get shot up like him!
kinda played..ehh..ok i guess
Fuck a closer..shit..don't need one..i don't know whats worse
Reading ya fucking name..or reading ya fucking verse!
ehhhhh, so-so

Overall, makaveli, dude, your in a battle .. this isnt story telling time..you really need to elevate badly..and John, you arent quite in the same boat, but if you were battling someone who actually knew what they were doing, you prolly woulda got beat..no hate to either, just being honest aiight?

Vote ~ John Dough (i'm almost at poll vote, sorta..if this aint decided by then, i be back aight?)